Comments on: Sailing

By: Crafty Green Poet

Crafty Green Poet — Fri, 16 Jan 2009 09:19:24 +0000

I love the ending of this…

Sandy — Tue, 13 Jan 2009 22:26:07 +0000

So nice, I like the way you ended it.

floreta — Tue, 13 Jan 2009 17:45:46 +0000

this is a metaphor for life! it reminds me of the book ‘the alchemist’.

Amias — Tue, 13 Jan 2009 14:14:03 +0000

This is very profound indeed! Then ending is so poetically refreshing.

“both truth and treasure
inked upon his hands.”

SandyCarlson — Tue, 13 Jan 2009 10:45:38 +0000

Absolutely! And may that brave sailor keep on…!

fivereflections — Tue, 13 Jan 2009 04:01:35 +0000

very creative and very inspiring